Category: Writers Block
Hello everyone! This is my first poem on the zone. I hope you like it. There will be more to come.
Something In Your Voice
By Jacqueline
There is something in your voice,
That sometimes makes me cry.
it makes me want to melt,
And, I don’t know why.
Your songs, they give such feeling,
I really can’t explain.
And whenever I am hurting,,
You take away the pain.
Your piano playing soothes me,
Your harmonies are so strong.
I just wanted to thank you,
Deticated to Freddy Mercury
For giving me your songs.
Hi that is great. I think that first part reminds me of me in some ways. I hope you get some other good comments.
very good. I like it. I used to write poems like that, I wrote one about Aretha. dunno if I'll post it here, cuz it's kinda weird, but yeah...I like yours. put more up!
I would love to see more poems. I found it to be tuching to me.
That was a wonderful poem. You are very good at making the words flow, and you did a great job with the rhyming. Why not send this off to the musician himself? :)
I wish I could Classicrock, but he died of ades in 1991. And I don't know how I would send it to Brian May, Roger Taylor or John Decan, the other members of queen.
And how many people did he infect through having selfish unprotected sex.
It was a very good poem. Please send us more.